u/CinderRodin

[Topic Suggestions] [Historical] [Discussion]

So I made a decent script but I want to make more. I'm also trying to build a niche within the community which would be

  1. Historical settings
  2. Classical Novel adaptations/or at least pastiches on the genre.

Would people find that interesting? Are there specific scenarios within those bounds people would especially enjoy?

(Also apologies to the mods for the formatting issues. I'm very new at using Reddit)

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u/CinderRodin — 3 days ago

[Introduction]

Hello! I've been listening to GWAs for years and realized there were some enough niches I would like to see filled, which meant there might be a reason for me to pick up writing. Looking to make friends and learn. I've already posted my first script, which was rather ambitious, and I have a question for writers and fillers.

How do you have a sense of if things will be filled? My script got *some* attention. It was the number 1 post on this server that day and got a healthy number of upvotes and script views, and *fifty* shares, but I got 0 comments. What should I expect from that data?

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u/CinderRodin — 3 days ago
▲ 31 r/GWAScriptGuild+1 crossposts

A Story of Revenge, Humiliation, Betrayal, and Power set during the French Revolution 🇫🇷

Four friends of different political persuasions sack the Tuileries Palace after the King tries to betray the revolution. They have different ideas of how to handle the nobility and chaos ensues.

A collaborative project, where one performer has the word count of a standard GWA, at least according to Christina's guide, and the rest of the players have much shorter roles. I hope this makes the behemoth a bit more manageable. Also, if people are interested in filling it out, but want it to be slightly different, I can offer two script alterations. Reach out if you are serious about filling it but would prefer one of these versions.

  1. I could make a simpler FF4M script, with just Marianne and Marie.
  2. If a guy likes the script, but wants a larger role, I can make Bonnie a man and have him take things into his own er hands at the end in an FFFMMM4A script.

Improvisation and making it your own is encouraged! You've probably filled more scripts than I've written and I want this to be fun. There are sound effect cues, but I've written it so that the script functions without any of them besides the ones made by the human voice, so feel free to omit them if they sound like a pain. I'd much rather this script be adapted without sound effects than not be filled at all.

Word count: Marianne (M) : 1,513, Marie (A) : 295 (Though lots of reacting sounds), Charlotte (C) : 526, Bonnie (B) : 387, Swiss Guard 1: 24, Swiss Guard 2: 40

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M - Oh come on don't be sad. The queen let us eat cake. Now you get to eat cock.

[Very annoyed] A - Oh for God's sake she didn't even say..

(She is interrupted by listener forcing his cock down her throat. Listener starts face fucking her.)

M - Ah now you're starting to get into it. You like making this royal highness your whore? They let us starve for centuries and now you're giving her proper thanks. It makes me wet just thinking about it.

script right here

https://scriptbin.works/u/CinderRodin/fffmm4m-the-revolution-eats-out-her-children

I'm realizing the header says FFFMM4M when it should in fact be FFFFMM4M. My bad.

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u/CinderRodin — 20 days ago

this is my very first attempt at a script and it's about the French Revolution. I want more historical work, so I decided to make my own. I know it's a bit out there and rather elaborate for a first outing but this idea has been swimming in my head for ages and I can't be the only one to want something like this. As a note, I know it's gauche to suggest accents, but I wish to share this with anyone who might not be in the know. Napoleon Bonaparte was from Corsica and had a thick Italian accent he was made fun of for. So "Bonnie" should get an Italian accent, if any. I'll also be posting a version where Bonaparte is a guy if anyone would prefer that.

A few friends in the French Revolution take the Tuileries after they hear news of a royalist plot. But how they will deal with the old nobility will cause some conflict and things get sexual

I have moral qualms with making CNC porn about real people, especially considering the genuinely awful treatment certain women faced during the revolution, so instead of having Marie Antoinette or any other real figures feature, I've made a bunch of amalgamation characters representing different factions.

Marrianne is a radical Jacobin/socialist/Enragés. The listener is a Dantonist Republican. Charlotte represents the Girondins: Warhawks (L), Republicans (W), Abolitionists (W), and those who wanted to treat the dying monarchy with gentler hands (mixed bag). Many of the first modern feminists were Girondins funnily enough, and most of them died on the scaffold during the terror. Bonnie is obviously a Bonapartist.

If this isn't abstract enough, and people feel weird about this, I'm happy to delete it and my account. This is very much an experiment and I don't want to do something unethical.

It's an early draft, I kind of just threw it into script bin in a few hours and I'm super open to feedback of all kinds.

The script is here.

https://scriptbin.works/s/4thmj

and here is a snippet.

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M - Get on your knees bitch. Very good. Hey you. You said she was pretty. Right? Stand over there. Right in front of her. Like that.

[Horrified and disbelieving] A - What are you?

M - Now take your cock out. Yeah very good. Already hard? Perfect. Now,

A - Agh! get this disgusting thing out of my face you filthy peasant.

[excited] M - Oh that was a bad call your highness.

A - And why's that?

M - I could tell in his eyes he was feeling hesitation. He didn't want to force himself upon a lady. But now that you've said that, the conflict he was feeling is gone.

A - (horrified gasp of realization) No no monsieur. i say.

M - Kiss it.

A - What?! Absolutely no...

M - I will remind you I'm pointing a gun at you.

A - (Noise of fear and frustration). I'll have you crushed between stones from the ruined Bastille when this is done.

[A kisses the tip of the cock gingerly.]

M - Good. Now lick it.

[A makes a sound of protest but licks it.]

M - Now take it in your mouth. Yes. Like that. No.

(M shoves A's throat on the cock and A makes surprised and alarmed sounds and gags.)

M - Like you mean it. You royals are supposed to serve the people. Do your job.

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u/CinderRodin — 21 days ago