u/NoMissingInk

[F4M] The 'What If' Game [Feedback/Beta] [Vanilla] [Adult] [Consensual] [On A Date] [Kissing] [Grinding] [Furniture Sex] [Listener Orgasm] [Speaker Orgasm] [Self-Degradation] [Cum Play] [Clothes Stay On]

This script is my first ever, so I would like any constructive feedback about formatting and readability, tagging, and anything I need to include in a post as a script offer on the subreddit. Specifically: I'm a bit unsure about the directions and cues, but I overall tried to limit it to things that would be helpful to a performer; and regarding the tags, I'm following a few practices recommended in some of the guides, but I'm unsure about whether to use tags I would consider redundant (e.g. [Grinding] [Frottage] [Dry Humping], or [Furniture Sex] [Sex on the Couch] [Fucking on the Couch]). Any advice or feedback in the comments would be greatly appreciated!

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u/NoMissingInk — 3 days ago

[Introduction] Hello There. NoMissingInk.

Hello everybody,

Long time listener, first time script writer. I've done some poetry and prose before (mostly not spicy), but I'm excited to try the format and hopefully hear some of my kinks brought to life. I'm really just adventuring into writing anything NSFW overall.

The Basics:

  • Pronouns are he/him or they/them (we're trying to find what fits)
  • I write whatever I'm currently into, and that changes every time I sit down to write something
  • I'm also a math and numbers guy, and I will eventually find a way to write an entire sex scene around pi.

Very excited to be here, I love to give feedback to other folks and just be someone who sees what other people have created. Hopefully I'll get something polished enough to ask for review soon.

Stay steamy and happy writing!

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u/NoMissingInk — 7 days ago