[F4M] The 'What If' Game [Feedback/Beta] [Vanilla] [Adult] [Consensual] [On A Date] [Kissing] [Grinding] [Furniture Sex] [Listener Orgasm] [Speaker Orgasm] [Self-Degradation] [Cum Play] [Clothes Stay On]
This script is my first ever, so I would like any constructive feedback about formatting and readability, tagging, and anything I need to include in a post as a script offer on the subreddit. Specifically: I'm a bit unsure about the directions and cues, but I overall tried to limit it to things that would be helpful to a performer; and regarding the tags, I'm following a few practices recommended in some of the guides, but I'm unsure about whether to use tags I would consider redundant (e.g. [Grinding] [Frottage] [Dry Humping], or [Furniture Sex] [Sex on the Couch] [Fucking on the Couch]). Any advice or feedback in the comments would be greatly appreciated!