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Title: “The Uninvited Stay” M4F

Title: “The Uninvited Stay”

Characters:

Rahul – Husband, working in the city

Priya – Rahul’s wife, caring mother, adjusting to city life

Amit – Rahul’s old friend, unexpectedly stuck due to lockdown

It had been four years since Rahul got married to Priya. Life was simple in the village, but after getting a job in the city, Rahul moved with his small family — Priya and their little son Aryan. They rented a one-room kitchen flat in the suburbs and adjusted to the chaos of city life, slowly finding comfort in their routine.

Months passed.

One day, Amit — Rahul's childhood friend — came from the village for a job interview and planned to stay just one night. But fate had other plans.

That very evening, a sudden government announcement declared an emergency lockdown. No buses, no trains — no return.

Now, the one-night guest had to stay indefinitely.

With no other choice, all four of them — Rahul, Priya, Aryan, and Amit — adjusted to the tight space. They arranged the single bed so all of them could somehow fit. The order usually went: Amit, then Rahul, then Aryan in the middle, and finally Priya on the edge.

At first, things were fine.

Amit helped around the house. He chatted with Priya while Rahul worked from home or ran errands. Slowly, Priya became comfortable with him — after all, he was her husband’s friend. But Rahul began noticing the little things — the extra laughter, the long conversations at night while he was busy on office calls. It felt casual… or was it?

One night around 1:00 AM, Rahul woke up feeling slightly uneasy. The fan was squeaking. He turned to his side — Amit wasn’t there. Aryan was asleep beside him. But from the far end of the bed, near Priya’s side, came the faintest sound — a whisper? A giggle? He wasn’t sure.

He didn’t move. He just listened. His breath is slow, his eyes open in the dark.

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u/SoggyTrip6323 — 4 days ago

**THE MISTAKE** m4f

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*I picked up the call when I heard her voice trembling and it seemed she'd cried just before calling me.*

***"Rahil...It's me! Madhav cheated on me. He has been cheating on me this whole time. You were right about him from the beginning. I was so stupid and in love with him that I didn't believe you. I am so sorry. Can you please come over? I don't want to be alone right now."***

*She seemed to be in a vulnerable state, I look at the clock it was past midnight already and then turned to see my beautiful wife sleeping next to me like a baby.*

***"Are you crazy, Disha? You know what happened last time when we met. You knew I am married to your best friend and still that night....Uggghhh...I am sorry, I just can't. Please try to understand. I can't do that to Priya."***

*By this time my mind had already started playing those passionate and wild scenes of that night when we met as I tried to shake them off of my mind.*

***"Rahil please....Nothing is going to happen like that. It was a stupid mistake, we both were drunk. I have already kicked Madhav out of the apartment and you know I don't know anyone in the city except you and Priya. I really want someone to talk to. Please come?"***

*I knew where this was going, I look at Priya again as I took a deep breath. I didn't say anything for a few seconds, my mind was battling with my heart and I knew I am making a mistake but I finally said.* ***"Fine! I am on my way!"***

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u/SoggyTrip6323 — 12 days ago