u/robluvscurves

The setting sun poured through the wide windows of the beach house, bathing the room in molten gold while the ocean breathed beyond the balcony in slow relentless swells. Candles scented with santal and vanilla burned low enough to perfume the air until each inhale felt thick, warm, almost intoxicating.

Lori stood in the open doorway, the breeze lifting the short dark ends of her hair from the damp nape of her neck. She felt stripped already, though the thin dress still clung to her body, because Todd was watching her with the kind of focus that made clothing meaningless.

His eyes moved over her with slow deliberate hunger. Not a glance. Not admiration. Appraisal. Possession. Promise. Heat gathered low in her belly, liquid and insistent.

For years she had become skilled at diminishing herself before anyone else had the chance to. She knew how to laugh things off, how to redirect attention, how to give without asking. But Todd stood there making no move to rescue her from being seen. He wanted her exactly in this moment of exposure, and the realization made every nerve under her skin begin to hum.

He crossed the room with measured steps. He had a clean masculine heat. Then his hands closed around her waist. “Come here, love.” His mouth claimed hers before she could breathe.

The kiss was deep and devastatingly controlled. Todd kissed as if he had all night to make her lose herself. Every slow glide of his lips coaxed another sound from her. Every measured pass of his tongue made her soften further against him. Lori felt consumed by patience, which somehow made it far more dangerous than urgency.

She moaned softly.

Todd swallowed the sound and tightened his hold.

“That’s it,” he murmured against her mouth. “Let me hear you.”

The low praise sent a sharp pulse between her thighs.

His fingers slipped to the straps of her dress and drew them down with agonizing slowness. Cool evening air touched her shoulders, then her breasts as the fabric descended, then the sensitive plane of her stomach. Todd pushed the dress over her hips inch by inch until it whispered to the floor.

Lori stood naked in front of him. His gaze dropped. She watched his throat work. Todd looked at her breasts until her nipples tightened painfully. He looked lower, over the pale softness of her stomach, over the inside of her thighs, where the heat between them had already left her visibly damp. A rough exhale left him.

“You have no idea what you do to me.”

Lori trembled.

Todd slid two fingers slowly between her thighs. He did not thrust them inside. He only traced the slickness gathered there, spreading it lazily, learning how wet she was.

Lori gasped and her knees weakened.

Todd lifted his glistening fingers. “Look at this,” he said quietly, his eyes on hers. “All this from me touching you.”

Humiliation flashed hot through her, immediately chased by a thrill so fierce it bordered on pain. She made a tiny desperate sound. Todd smiled.

“There she is.”

He kissed her again, harder this time, and walked her backward until the bed caught behind her knees. Lori fell onto the white sheets, breathless and flushed. Todd followed, kneeling between her thighs with the calm confidence of a man who knew exactly what he intended to do.

“Tonight,” he said, dragging his fingertips up the inside of one trembling leg, “you stop thinking.” His hand slid higher. “You stop worrying.” Higher still. His fingers brushed her once, barely. Lori jolted. “And you let me make you feel good.” The final words came almost as a command.

Todd bent over her throat and kissed her there, damp open kisses that made her pulse flutter wildly. His stubble scraped just enough to leave every nerve sharpened. One hand closed over her breast and kneaded firmly. His thumb circled the nipple until Lori cried out.

“So responsive,” he murmured.

He lowered his mouth and drew the nipple in.

Lori arched instantly.

The suction was slow and deep, his tongue lavishing attention on the hardened peak until heat shot straight through her center. Todd alternated mouth and hand with maddening rhythm, one breast then the other, each pass making her wetter, needier, less coherent.

Her fingers buried in his hair. “Todd, please.”

He lifted his head. “Please what?”

Lori stared at him, chest heaving. She could not force the words out. Todd’s eyes darkened with satisfaction.

“That’s what I thought.”

He kissed lower. Across her ribs. Over her stomach. Along the delicate inside of one thigh. Then the other. Never where she needed him. Each lingering kiss made her hips twitch upward in silent pleading. Todd pressed one broad palm to her lower belly and held her still.

“Be patient.”

“I can’t” Lori whispered.

His eyes lifted to hers.

“You can. You will.”

The certainty in his voice made her shudder.

Todd spread her thighs wider.

Cool air hit the soaked center of her body and Lori whimpered at the exposure. She could feel herself pulsing there, slickness gathering, every nerve ending focused into one throbbing desperate ache.

Todd looked between her legs with open masculine hunger.

“So beautiful like this.”

The words made her stomach tighten.

He bent and kissed her once through the slick folds.

Lori cried out.

The contact was almost too much after all the waiting.

Todd kissed her again, then dragged his tongue slowly upward, collecting wetness, parting her with deliberate strokes that made Lori writhe beneath him. He licked her with infuriating patience, broad slow passes followed by tiny focused circles that never lasted long enough.

She was shaking within seconds.

“Todd... Todd, please...”

He hummed approval against her.

“That needy for my mouth?”

“Yes,” she sobbed.

“Yes what?”

“Yes, please.”

Todd groaned low in his throat, as though the answer pleased something primitive in him, and then his mouth sealed more firmly over the place that had been throbbing for him from the moment he looked at her.

Lori nearly screamed.

Pleasure shot through her in a blinding hot line.

Todd held her thighs open and worked her with relentless control, alternating sucking pressure and slow swirling strokes of his tongue until Lori could do nothing but twist and beg. Every time she neared the edge, he eased back just enough to keep her suspended there, body shaking, breath shattered, nerves screaming for release.

“You can take more,” he murmured into her.

The vibration made her sob.

Todd flattened his tongue and dragged it through her again.

Lori bucked violently.

“That’s it,” he said. “Give it to me.”

His forearm locked over her hips, pinning her helplessly while his mouth drove her higher. Lori was beyond words now, beyond thought. She could hear herself crying, could feel tears slipping into her hair, could feel the unbearable tightening low in her body drawing tighter and tighter until there was nothing left but need.

“I’m going to...” she gasped.

“I know.”

Todd sucked hard.

Lori shattered with a broken cry.

The orgasm hit so hard it stole sound from her for a second. Then pleasure crashed through her in savage pulsing waves, each one wrenching another sob from her chest. Todd stayed with her, licking her through every violent tremor, every oversensitive contraction, making the release go on and on until Lori was shaking uncontrollably.

Only when she was limp and breathless did he rise.

His mouth glistened.

His eyes were dark with something almost feral.

Todd climbed onto the bed and gathered her into his chest.

She collapsed against him, still trembling.

His hand slid into her hair and held her there while he pressed a kiss to her temple.

“Good girl,” he whispered.

The words sent a fresh helpless shiver through her exhausted body.

Lori made a tiny sound and curled closer.

Outside, the ocean kept moving.

Inside, held in his arms, damp with sweat, still pulsing from what he had taken and given, Lori felt utterly dismantled in the most exquisite way.

Seen.

Claimed.

And too deliciously undone to ever disappear again.

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