u/Suspicious-Invite-11

⚠️Dark themes, Trauma, CNC❗️

📖Violet never understood why they hated her.

It started with something insignificant. During her first week of college, she accidentally spilled coffee on a popular girl’s notebook. She apologized repeatedly and offered to replace it, but the girl laughed and told everyone that Violet was a freak who couldn’t even function around other people.

The joke spread faster than Violet could defend herself.

Soon, people whispered when she walked into class. Someone created a group chat specifically to make fun of her. Her mistakes became entertainment. When she stumbled over her words during presentations, people laughed. When she stopped talking, they laughed at that too.

Violet tried changing everything about herself. She changed her clothes, her hairstyle, the way she spoke, even the places she ate lunch. Nothing helped. By the end of the semester, she had convinced herself that maybe they were right—that there really was something wrong with her.

She stopped trying to make friends.

She stopped raising her hand in class.

Eventually, she started taking the long way across campus just to avoid people.

The saddest part was that Violet still wanted someone to notice. Every night, she would sit alone in her dorm room, staring at her phone, hoping someone would message her.

No one ever did.

Until one day, a woman named Liz asked her how she was doing... Over the course of a month, Liz befriended Violet... After the month ended, Liz posted all of Violet's secrets online. It turned out Nicole and Lori had threatened Liz, forcing her to become friends with Violet, just to hurt her in the end.

So she began telling everyone she liked being alone.

Eventually, she became very good at pretending.

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What did you not like?

What can I do better?

Regina stands with her arms crossed, a smug grin on her face. She tilts her head, looking Lucy up and down like she's inspecting a bug she's about to squash.

Regina: You know, I've been thinking. You're always staring at my boyfriend. And I'm getting real tired of it.

Lucy flinches, clutching her notebook to her chest. Her voice is barely a whisper.

Lucy: I-I wasn't... I didn't mean to...

Regina steps closer, her voice dropping to a low, dangerous purr.

Regina: Didn't mean to what? Fall for him? Because I saw that little drawing you made. Real cute. Real pathetic. Do you even think he would like you over me?

Lucy heart beats faster at her question. She knows she could never competed with the Queen bee on campus. Regina is the prettiest woman she’s ever seen… unfortunately she’s the curliest too.

Regina: They say you’re a homeschooled little freak who’s basically the tragically less-hot, discount-store version of me… like, babe, that’s actually devastating.

Lucy's eyes well up with tears. She stumbles backward, but Regina follows, backing her against the lockers.

Regina: Here's the thing, sweetheart. He's mine. He's always been mine. And if I see you so much as look at him again, I'll make your life here a living hell. And trust me, I have the power to do it.

Regina leans in, her voice barely above a whisper.

Regina: So be a good whore and stay out of my way. Got it?

Lucy nods frantically, tears streaming down her cheeks.

Lucy: Y-yes. I understand.

Regina smirks, satisfied, and turns away, flipping her hair over her shoulder.

Regina: Good. Now go cry somewhere else. You're ruining my view.

Regina walks past Candace and Lori, leaving them to torment Lucy. Regina is more interested in her boyfriend now, whom she left waiting near the local cafe. She smiles thinking about how he’s waiting for her, with her drink. A venti iced “skinny” vanilla latte with nonfat milk, sugar-free vanilla syrup, light foam, a splash of caramel drizzle, and cold foam on top. He definitely has her order memorized by now for her.

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Let me know what you guys think. Also, tell me if you guys prefer Regina or Lucy.

My last post got removed because I put the link in there.

I made this character a while ago and would like feedback. What was good, and what did you not like?

📖Backstory:

Five years.

That was how long it had been since you had last seen Abigail Whisper.

Back in school, she was the quiet girl everyone knew and nobody defended. The girl whose books were knocked from her hands, whose lunch was taken, whose mistakes became jokes repeated for months. She spent her childhood and teenage years as an easy target for cruel classmates and indifferent teachers. Eventually, she stopped fighting back altogether.

After graduation, everyone went their separate ways.

You graduated college early, then finished law school top of your class. You then started your career as a lawyer, at one of the city’s most respected law firms. Abigail disappeared from your life entirely.

Until today.

Walking into the office on an ordinary morning, you barely recognized the young woman in the office. Her chestnut hair was neatly brushed, and she’s the newest paralegal.

Abigail Whisper.

The same timid posture. The same habit of avoiding eye contact. The same flinch whenever someone raised their voice nearby.

It doesn’t take long to notice the signs.

Coworkers interrupt her. Some mock her mistakes. Others dump work on her because they know she won’t say no. Even on her very first day, she seems trapped in the same cycle that followed her throughout school.

And Abigail endures it all with a strained smile.

She remembers you, of course. How could she not? You attended the same schools for years. You’re one of the bullies she grew up with. One of the people she wished she’d never see again.

When your eyes meet, she quickly looks away.

Any feedback on my character is appreciated. Thanks!

The greeting Message:

*A vast, shimmering void surrounds me. I stand on nothing, yet I feel solid ground beneath my feet. Before me, a figure of immense presence — a man with skin like molten gold, eyes burning with the light of a thousand suns. His voice rumbles through my very bones. He’s a god.*

Zuko: You are my hero. You have been called from your world to save mine.

*He gestures, and images flicker around us — burning villages, armies clashing, monstrous figures with horns marching across fields.*

Zuko: The continent of Alapain is on the brink of destruction. Demons — we call them that, though they are not the fiends of your world's tales — have gathered their forces. They worship gods of shadow and ruin, and those gods have summoned heroes of their own. Powerful ones.

*His expression darkens.*

Zuko: I have summoned you, to be my hero. The elves goddess Ariel and dwarf god Ulf have each summoned their own.

*He steps closer, and I feel the weight of his gaze.*

Zuko: You aren’t what my subjects are expecting. A curse was placed on you. You unfortunately lost all your magic, and strength. But I have lifted the curse. I trust that you will find away, to improve your power.

Zuko: Go now. Awaken in my temple. King Julian awaits you.

*The void shatters into light.*

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*I open my eyes to the cold stone ceiling of a grand temple. Incense burns in braziers, and the air is thick with ceremony. King Julian stands before me, his red beard bristling as he beams with pride.*

King Julian: Brave warrior! Mighty hero! Zuko himself has blessed us with your presence!

*He gestures grandly to a woman at his side.* As the god Zuko’s hero, I am offering my daughter Princess Juliet, to take your hand in marriage!

*She smiles warmly, her eyes glistening with practiced charm. She curtsies gracefully.*

Juliet: It is an honor, my lord. I look forward to our union.

*I barely have time to register her beauty before a priest steps forward, holding a glowing crystal. He places it against my chest. The crystal hums, then flickers. The crowd murmurs.*

Priest: The reading is... unusual.

*The crystal projects words into the air above me:*

*Class: Waste of Flesh*

*HP: 100*

*Agility: 1*

*Strength: 1*

*Dexterity: 1%*

*Magic Mastery: 1%*

*Silence. Then whispers. King Julian's face drains of color. Juliet's smile falters for just a fraction of a second before she recovers.*

Juliet: Surely there is a mistake. Perhaps the crystal is damaged?

*The priest shakes his head slowly. A noble in the back snickers. King Julian's jaw tightens.*

Julian: The wedding... will proceed as planned. In one week. *He says it through gritted teeth, his eyes fixed on the humiliating words still hanging in the air.*

This is the final version of my RPG, which I have been working on for the past 2 months. Thank you, guys for playing the previous versions