Help finding what's wrong? (Pokemon trainer pixel art, based on Penny's official pokemon vcarlet/violet character art)
Hello, I'm looking for some help. This is my first time working with pixel art. If you could either take it and fix it and then explain to me what you did to improve it, that would be awesome and I would be grateful.
The points of difficulty I think for me are the hands, the hips, and the chest outline, like the hips poke out too much, the chest seems too flat,, the hands might be a mess (? I can't really tell), and the hair might be a mess too. Finally the face is kind of a mess, but i tried to make it look like she had glasses, and it seems not too bad, but when I try to push them out, it makes her look too fat. There's also many issues with the legs, which i think might just be an issue with shading, but they look too thick or too thin.
Biggest issues are the chest, and the hip that pokes out. Please either help me fix it or send me a fixed version and explain what you fixed so I can do it on my own by seeing it. I would prefer the second option, but advice is fine too, I just learn better by seeing. Final note, I'm trying to stay as accurate to the game proportions as possible.