[A4A] Notches [Poetry Offer] [Previous Relationship] [Angst]

You weren't just another notch in my belt
Though I've tried to make a few since you left
But the leather's too thick
It won't bend to my will
Or my dull, rusty knife

I struggle to cut through
Until, exasperated, I give up
My pants sag with every step
And I hike them back up again

A Sisyphean task

Sometimes, I wish the boulder would just crush me instead

The bags under my eyes carry too much
They wouldn't be allowed on a plane
Let alone a soul

There's a haze in the air today
Wildfire smoke blowing south
You lit a fire in me, then quenched it

Efficient forestry

I'll give you that

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u/AchillesandhisPal — 3 days ago

[F4M] Mirror, Mirror, Made of Plastic, Who's the Grippiest in the Psychiatric? [Script Offer] [DARK] [Drugged] [RAPE] [MEAN] [Mentally Unstable Speaker] [You Deserve This] [Degradation] [Handjob] [Licking His Tears] [Cowgirl] [Creampie] slight [CBT] [Blackmail] [No One Will Ever Believe You]

TRIGGER WARNING:
Please be careful and kind to yourself going into reading this. This script contains rape, abuse, and a brief mention of suicide/self-harm.

Additional tags: [Very INTENSE] [Brief Mention of Suicide/Self-Harm]

~1300 Words

Summary

You’re a male nurse in your city’s main psychiatric ward. It’s rewarding work. You feel like you’re making a difference, even if your patients don’t always feel the same way. But there’s one patient in particular who you’ve come to admire. She’s typically quiet and keeps to herself. But there’s much, much more behind that facade. And she’s about to show you exactly what she’s capable of.

Hi. This is the darkest thing I've ever written. PLEASE be good to yourself and check all the tags as well as the trigger warnings before reading.

You can find the script here.

You can find my anonymous feedback form here.

DISCLAIMER: All characters depicted in this work are fictional and above the age of 18. Absolutely no use of my work for AI in any way whatsoever.

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u/AchillesandhisPal — 10 days ago

[F4M] Mirror, Mirror, Made of Plastic, Who's the Grippiest in the Psychiatric? [Script Offer] [DARK] [Drugged] [RAPE] [MEAN] [Mentally Unstable Speaker] [You Deserve This] [Degradation] [Handjob] [Licking His Tears] [Cowgirl] [Creampie] slight [CBT] [Blackmail] [No One Will Ever Believe You]

TRIGGER WARNING:
Please be careful and kind to yourself going into reading this. This script contains rape, abuse, and a brief mention of suicide/self-harm.

Additional tags: [Very INTENSE] [Brief Mention of Suicide/Self-Harm]

~1300 Words

Summary

You’re a male nurse in your city’s main psychiatric ward. It’s rewarding work. You feel like you’re making a difference, even if your patients don’t always feel the same way. But there’s one patient in particular who you’ve come to admire. She’s typically quiet and keeps to herself. But there’s much, much more behind that facade. And she’s about to show you exactly what she’s capable of.

Hi. This is the darkest thing I've ever written. PLEASE be good to yourself and check all the tags as well as the trigger warnings before reading.

You can find the script here.

You can find my anonymous feedback form here.

DISCLAIMER: All characters depicted in this work are fictional and above the age of 18. Absolutely no use of my work for AI in any way whatsoever.

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u/AchillesandhisPal — 10 days ago

[F4M] Mirror, Mirror, Made of Plastic, Who's the Grippiest in the Psychiatric? [Script Offer] [DARK] [Drugged] [RAPE] [MEAN] [Mentally Unstable Speaker] [You Deserve This] [Degradation] [Handjob] [Licking His Tears] [Cowgirl] [Creampie] slight [CBT] [Blackmail] [No One Will Ever Believe You]

TRIGGER WARNING:
Please be careful and kind to yourself going into reading this. This script contains rape, abuse, and a brief mention of suicide/self-harm.

Additional tags: [Very INTENSE] [Brief Mention of Suicide/Self-Harm]

~1300 Words

Summary

You’re a male nurse in your city’s main psychiatric ward. It’s rewarding work. You feel like you’re making a difference, even if your patients don’t always feel the same way. But there’s one patient in particular who you’ve come to admire. She’s typically quiet and keeps to herself. But there’s much, much more behind that facade. And she’s about to show you exactly what she’s capable of.

Hi. This is the darkest thing I've ever written. PLEASE be good to yourself and check all the tags as well as the trigger warnings before reading.

You can find the script here.

You can find my anonymous feedback form here.

DISCLAIMER: All characters depicted in this work are fictional and above the age of 18. Absolutely no use of my work for AI in any way whatsoever.

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u/AchillesandhisPal — 10 days ago

[F4M] Mirror, Mirror, Made of Plastic, Who's the Grippiest in the Psychiatric? [Script Offer] [DARK] [Drugged] [RAPE] [MEAN] [Mentally Unstable Speaker] [You Deserve This] [Degradation] [Handjob] [Licking His Tears] [Cowgirl] [Creampie] slight [CBT] [Blackmail] [No One Will Ever Believe You]

TRIGGER WARNING:
Please be careful and kind to yourself going into reading this. This script contains rape, abuse, and a brief mention of suicide/self-harm.

Additional tags: [Very INTENSE] [Brief Mention of Suicide/Self-Harm]

~1300 Words

Summary

You’re a male nurse in your city’s main psychiatric ward. It’s rewarding work. You feel like you’re making a difference, even if your patients don’t always feel the same way. But there’s one patient in particular who you’ve come to admire. She’s typically quiet and keeps to herself. But there’s much, much more behind that facade. And she’s about to show you exactly what she’s capable of.

Hi. This is the darkest thing I've ever written. PLEASE be good to yourself and check all the tags as well as the trigger warnings before reading.

You can find the script here.

You can find my anonymous feedback form here.

DISCLAIMER: All characters depicted in this work are fictional and above the age of 18. Absolutely no use of my work for AI in any way whatsoever.

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u/AchillesandhisPal — 10 days ago

[F4M] Aha Ha, Just Kidding... Unless??? [Script Offer] [Roommates to Lovers [Adorkable] [Take the Hint!] [Shy/Nerdy Speaker] to [Confident Switch] [Kissing] [Fingering] [Handjob] [Cowgirl] [1x Speaker Orgasm] + [Mutual Final Climax] [Short Aftercare]

~1,200 Words

Summary

You've moved in with a stranger only a month ago. Over the past few weeks, you’ve come to find that you two have a lot more in common than you thought. She’s shy, dorky, and a total nerd. But you really love that about her. As it turns out, maybe she likes you a lot more than you knew…

Excerpt:
“I… well, I may have feelings for you…” 

“No. Fuck it.” 

“I do have feelings for you.”

“I’m so sorry…”

“I can’t help myself. And… and all the movie nights we spent together… all the things you do around the house for us. For me. Not just anyone would do that.”

“It’s almost like we’re a co- umm, like we, well, fit well together. Like we… *belong* together....”

You can find the script here.

You can find my anonymous feedback form here.

DISCLAIMER: All characters depicted in this work are fictional and above the age of 18. Absolutely no use of my work for AI in any way whatsoever.

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u/AchillesandhisPal — 18 days ago

[F4M] Aha Ha, Just Kidding... Unless??? [Script Offer] [Roommates to Lovers [Adorkable] [Take the Hint!] [Shy/Nerdy Speaker] to [Confident Switch] [Kissing] [Fingering] [Handjob] [Cowgirl] [1x Speaker Orgasm] + [Mutual Final Climax] [Short Aftercare]

~1,200 Words

Summary

You've moved in with a stranger only a month ago. Over the past few weeks, you’ve come to find that you two have a lot more in common than you thought. She’s shy, dorky, and a total nerd. But you really love that about her. As it turns out, maybe she likes you a lot more than you knew…

Excerpt:
“I… well, I may have feelings for you…” 

“No. Fuck it.” 

“I do have feelings for you.”

“I’m so sorry…”

“I can’t help myself. And… and all the movie nights we spent together… all the things you do around the house for us. For me. Not just anyone would do that.”

“It’s almost like we’re a co- umm, like we, well, fit well together. Like we… *belong* together....”

You can find the script here.

You can find my anonymous feedback form here.

DISCLAIMER: All characters depicted in this work are fictional and above the age of 18. Absolutely no use of my work for AI in any way whatsoever.

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u/AchillesandhisPal — 18 days ago

[F4M] Aha Ha, Just Kidding... Unless??? [Script Offer] [Roommates to Lovers [Adorkable] [Take the Hint!] [Shy/Nerdy Speaker] to [Confident Switch] [Kissing] [Fingering] [Handjob] [Cowgirl] [1x Speaker Orgasm] + [Mutual Final Climax] [Short Aftercare]

~1,200 Words

Summary

You've moved in with a stranger only a month ago. Over the past few weeks, you’ve come to find that you two have a lot more in common than you thought. She’s shy, dorky, and a total nerd. But you really love that about her. As it turns out, maybe she likes you a lot more than you knew…

Excerpt:
“I… well, I may have feelings for you…” 

“No. Fuck it.” 

“I do have feelings for you.”

“I’m so sorry…”

“I can’t help myself. And… and all the movie nights we spent together… all the things you do around the house for us. For me. Not just anyone would do that.”

“It’s almost like we’re a co- umm, like we, well, fit well together. Like we… *belong* together....”

You can find the script here.

You can find my anonymous feedback form here.

DISCLAIMER: All characters depicted in this work are fictional and above the age of 18. Absolutely no use of my work for AI in any way whatsoever.

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u/AchillesandhisPal — 18 days ago

[F4M] The Vestal Virgin Forsakes Her Vows For You [Script Offer] [Historical] [Ancient Rome] [Fsub] [Gentle Mdom] [Virgin Speaker] [Forbidden Love] [Fucking in the Temple] [Incredibly Risky] [Public Sex] [Hold the Moan] [Kissing] [Fingering] [Blowjob] [Standing Missionary] [Orgasms for All]

~1400 Words

Summary

It’s the last dying days of the Roman Republic. Beyond your better judgement, and beyond any logic, you’ve come to fall in love with a Vestal Virgin, one of the most sacred and prestigious priestesses in the Roman religion. But the consequences of your love weigh heavy between the two of you, and you know that following through on your feelings may spell death for both of you if anyone were to find out…

Hi all, another historical script for everyone. This is my first Fsub script, and I hope you like it!

Excerpt:

“Why should we bother with this dance of pretense, when there is a chance you could di-”

“...that you could be ripped from me? And I may not hear of it for years?”

“Am I to wait unceasingly, clinging to hope that you will survive your foolish, violent profession long enough to come back to me?”

“Am I to love you, knowing that any moment my heart, soul, and body could be torn asunder by what we choose to do here? By what could happen to us if we… if we…”

Much love and gratitude to u/Imaginary-Bad-4157 for beta reading this one for me!

You can find the script here.

You can find my anonymous feedback form here.

DISCLAIMER: All characters depicted in this work are fictional and above the age of 18. Absolutely no use of my work for AI in any way whatsoever.

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u/AchillesandhisPal — 21 days ago

[F4M] The Vestal Virgin Forsakes Her Vows For You [Script Offer] [Historical] [Ancient Rome] [Fsub] [Gentle Mdom] [Virgin Speaker] [Forbidden Love] [Fucking in the Temple] [Incredibly Risky] [Public Sex] [Hold the Moan] [Kissing] [Fingering] [Blowjob] [Standing Missionary] [Orgasms for All]

~1400 Words

Summary

It’s the last dying days of the Roman Republic. Beyond your better judgement, and beyond any logic, you’ve come to fall in love with a Vestal Virgin, one of the most sacred and prestigious priestesses in the Roman religion. But the consequences of your love weigh heavy between the two of you, and you know that following through on your feelings may spell death for both of you if anyone were to find out…

Hi all, another historical script for everyone. This is my first Fsub script, and I hope you like it!

Excerpt:

“Why should we bother with this dance of pretense, when there is a chance you could di-”

“...that you could be ripped from me? And I may not hear of it for years?”

“Am I to wait unceasingly, clinging to hope that you will survive your foolish, violent profession long enough to come back to me?”

“Am I to love you, knowing that any moment my heart, soul, and body could be torn asunder by what we choose to do here? By what could happen to us if we… if we…”

Much love and gratitude to u/Imaginary-Bad-4157 for beta reading this one for me!

You can find the script here.

You can find my anonymous feedback form here.

DISCLAIMER: All characters depicted in this work are fictional and above the age of 18. Absolutely no use of my work for AI in any way whatsoever.

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u/AchillesandhisPal — 22 days ago

[F4M] The Vestal Virgin Forsakes Her Vows For You [Script Offer] [Historical] [Ancient Rome] [Fsub] [Gentle Mdom] [Virgin Speaker] [Forbidden Love] [Fucking in the Temple] [Incredibly Risky] [Public Sex] [Hold the Moan] [Kissing] [Fingering] [Blowjob] [Standing Missionary] [Orgasms for All]

~1400 Words

Summary

It’s the last dying days of the Roman Republic. Beyond your better judgement, and beyond any logic, you’ve come to fall in love with a Vestal Virgin, one of the most sacred and prestigious priestesses in the Roman religion. But the consequences of your love weigh heavy between the two of you, and you know that following through on your feelings may spell death for both of you if anyone were to find out…

Hi all, another historical script for everyone. This is my first Fsub script, and I hope you like it!

Excerpt:

“Why should we bother with this dance of pretense, when there is a chance you could di-”

“...that you could be ripped from me? And I may not hear of it for years?”

“Am I to wait unceasingly, clinging to hope that you will survive your foolish, violent profession long enough to come back to me?”

“Am I to love you, knowing that any moment my heart, soul, and body could be torn asunder by what we choose to do here? By what could happen to us if we… if we…”

Much love and gratitude to u/Imaginary-Bad-4157 for beta reading this one for me!

You can find the script here.

You can find my anonymous feedback form here.

DISCLAIMER: All characters depicted in this work are fictional and above the age of 18. Absolutely no use of my work for AI in any way whatsoever.

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u/AchillesandhisPal — 22 days ago

[MM4A] Finish What You Started [Script Offer] [Radio Play] [Confrontation] [Reconciliation] [One Experienced Speaker] [One Inexperienced Speaker] [Switchy] [Making-Out] [Blowjob] to [Riding Anal] [Cum in Bussy] [Mutual Orgasm] [~2,200 Words]

Summary:

After a chance meeting at a bar one night, our two guys have spent the last month getting to know each other. But when the moment was finally right to hook-up, our more shy and "newly" bi boy panicked and ran. After a week of radio silence, he shows up at the door out of the blue, hoping he can explain himself...

Hi all, this is my fifth script. I wanted to branch out and do something a little different, something character-heavy and something that hopefully anyone could enjoy. I hope it came out okay. This is my first radio play, so any comments or feedback would be lovely. Hope you enjoy :)

You can find the script here.

You can find my anonymous feedback form here.

DISCLAIMER: All characters depicted in this work are fictional and above the age of 18. Absolutely no use of my work for AI in any way whatsoever.

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u/AchillesandhisPal — 27 days ago

[MM4A] Finish What You Started [Script Offer] [Radio Play] [Confrontation] [Reconciliation] [One Experienced Speaker] [One Inexperienced Speaker] [Switchy] [Making-Out] [Blowjob] to [Riding Anal] [Cum in Bussy] [Mutual Orgasm] [Short Aftercare]

~2,200 words

Summary:

After a chance meeting at a bar one night, our two guys have spent the last month getting to know each other. But when the moment was finally right to hook-up, our more shy and "newly" bi boy panicked and ran. After a week of radio silence, he shows up at the door out of the blue, hoping he can explain himself...

Hi all, this is my fifth script. I wanted to branch out and do something a little different, something character-heavy and something that hopefully anyone could enjoy. I hope it came out okay. This is my first radio play so any comments or feedback would be lovely. Hope you enjoy :)

You can find the script here.

You can find my anonymous feedback form here.

DISCLAIMER: All characters depicted in this work are fictional and above the age of 18. Absolutely no use of my work for AI in any way whatsoever.

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u/AchillesandhisPal — 27 days ago

[MM4A] Finish What You Started [Script Offer] [Radio Play] [Confrontation] [Reconciliation] [One Experienced Speaker] [One Inexperienced Speaker] [Switchy] [Making-Out] [Blowjob] to [Riding Anal] [Cum in Bussy] [Mutual Orgasm] [Short Aftercare]

~2,200 words

Summary:

After a chance meeting at a bar one night, our two guys have spent the last month getting to know each other. But when the moment was finally right to hook-up, our more shy and "newly" bi boy panicked and ran. After a week of radio silence, he shows up at the door out of the blue, hoping he can explain himself...

Hi all, this is my fifth script. I wanted to branch out and do something a little different, something character-heavy and something that hopefully anyone could enjoy. I hope it came out okay. This is my first radio play so any comments or feedback would be lovely. Hope you enjoy :)

You can find the script here.

You can find my anonymous feedback form here.

DISCLAIMER: All characters depicted in this work are fictional and above the age of 18. Absolutely no use of my work for AI in any way whatsoever.

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u/AchillesandhisPal — 27 days ago

[MM4A] Finish What You Started [Script Offer] [Radio Play] [Confrontation] [Reconciliation] [One Experienced Speaker] [One Inexperienced Speaker] [Switchy] [Making-Out] [Blowjob] to [Riding Anal] [Cum in Bussy] [Mutual Orgasm] [Short Aftercare]

~2,200 words

Summary:

After a chance meeting at a bar one night, our two guys have spent the last month getting to know each other. But when the moment was finally right to hook-up, our more shy and "newly" bi boy panicked and ran. After a week of radio silence, he shows up at the door out of the blue, hoping he can explain himself...

Hi all, this is my fifth script. I wanted to branch out and do something a little different, something character-heavy and something that hopefully anyone could enjoy. I hope it came out okay. This is my first radio play so any comments or feedback would be lovely. Hope you enjoy :)

You can find the script here.

You can find my anonymous feedback form here.

DISCLAIMER: All characters depicted in this work are fictional and above the age of 18. Absolutely no use of my work for AI in any way whatsoever.

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u/AchillesandhisPal — 27 days ago

[M4M] Yearning [Free-Form Poem] [Erotic] [Angst] [Post-Protestant "Guilt"] [~350 Words]

Poem here:

Hi, this is my first time posting on this sub. I hope I've read the wiki fully and that this format belongs on GWN. This was something that I've been sitting on for a bit and hesitated to post, but I hope it resonates with people.

Thank you all!

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u/AchillesandhisPal — 1 month ago

[F4M] [A Cameo] Standing Ov(ul)ation [Script Offer] [MILF] [Backstage Pass] [Fdom] [Msub] [Strangers to ???] [Ovulating] [Good Boy/Pet Names] [Kissing] [Curve and Belly Worship] [Nipple Play] [Going Up on Her] + [JOI] [Standing Missionary] [Standing Doggy] [Hair-Pulling] [Creampie] [Orgasms for All]

Additonal Tags: [Short Aftercare]

2, 818 Words

SUMMARY:

After your recent break-up, you’ve finally decided to splurge and see your favorite Broadway singer live in her newest musical. You even bought a VIP ticket to get to meet her after the show. You’re hoping for even just a few minutes to chat about the show and her singing, but it turns out she may have more in store for you than you bargained for...

Hi all, I have a new script offer for you. If you have any questions, concerns, comments, please feel free to comment on the post or DM me! I'd love to hear what you guys think. Thanks so much!

You can find the script here

DISCLAIMER: All characters depicted in this work are fictional and above the age of 18. Absolutely no use of my work for AI in any way whatsoever.

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u/AchillesandhisPal — 1 month ago

[F4M] [A Cameo] Standing Ov(ul)ation [Script Offer] [MILF] [Backstage Pass] [Fdom] [Msub] [Strangers to ???] [Ovulating] [Good Boy/Pet Names] [Kissing] [Curve and Belly Worship] [Nipple Play] [Going Up on Her] + [JOI] [Standing Missionary] [Standing Doggy] [Hair-Pulling] [Creampie] [Orgasms for All]

Additonal Tags: [Short Aftercare]

2,818 words

SUMMARY:

After your recent break-up, you’ve finally decided to splurge and see your favorite Broadway singer live in her newest musical. You even bought a VIP ticket to get to meet her after the show. You’re hoping for even just a few minutes to chat about the show and her singing, but it turns out she may have more in store for you than you bargained for...

Hi all, I have a new script offer for you. If you have any questions, concerns, comments, please feel free to comment on the post or DM me! I'd love to hear what you guys think. Thanks so much!

You can find the script here

DISCLAIMER: All characters depicted in this work are fictional and above the age of 18. Absolutely no use of my work for AI in any way whatsoever.

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u/AchillesandhisPal — 1 month ago

[F4M] Standing Ov(ul)ation [Script Offer] [Feedback] [MILF] [Backstage Pass] [Fdom] [Msub] [Strangers to ???] [Ovulating] [Good Boy/Pet Names] [Kissing] [Curve and Belly Worship] [Nipple Play] [Going Up on Her] + [JOI] [Standing Missionary] [Hair-Pulling] [Standing Doggy] [Creampie] [Orgasms4All]

Summary:

After your recent break-up, you’ve finally decided to splurge and see your favorite Broadway singer live in her newest musical. You even bought a VIP ticket to get to meet her after the show. You’re hoping for even just a few minutes to chat about the show and her singing, but it turns out she may have more in store for you than you bargained for…

Hi friends!

I swear to god one of these days I will write a script that's under 1,000 words. But for now, I have a new script and am looking for feedback and critique. If you have the time to read it I would greatly appreciate it!

My DMs are also open if anyone has thoughts, feedback, comments, whatever it happens to be.

You can find the script here

You can also find an anonymous feedback form here

As always, thank you guys so much and I really look forward to hearing from you!

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u/AchillesandhisPal — 1 month ago

[M4M] The Sacred Band [Script Offer] [Historical] [Ancient Greece] [Top4Bottom] [Bonded Pair] [Warrior Lovers] [Reassurance] [Affirmation] [Kissing] [Frotting] [Rimming] [Gentle] to [INTENSE] [Doggy] to [Missionary] [Mutual Climax] [Aftercare] [Falling Asleep Together] [WC: 1,973]

Summary

It’s 338 BCE, the night before what would become the Battle of Chaeronea. You are a member of the Theban Sacred Band, an elite hoplite unit of 150 pairs of male lovers. You know a battle may be coming tomorrow against Phillip II and his Macedonians, and the anxiety of the quiet before the storm has your stomach in knots. But the Fates guide your destiny, and your lover and faithful companion is there wherever and whenever you need him—on and off the battlefield.

Hi guys,

This is my first time posting in this sub and my third script in total. A few disclaimers:

  • This content cannot and should not be viewed by anyone under the age of 18.
  • Both characters are aged 21 years old.
  • No violence but brief mentions of war/battle as well as "fate" in the context of their profession
  • This script may not be used for AI in any way whatsoever.
  • This script is free and open to be filled by any VA, even behind a paywall. All I ask is that you DM or tag me in the post so I'm credited and I can see your work!

You can find the script here.

You can also find an anonymous feedback/critique form here.

Feel free to DM me if you have questions about the script. I encourage VA improv as long as it fits the context/tone/atmosphere. Thank you guys so much!

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u/AchillesandhisPal — 2 months ago