u/poquerman

I think that I saw it around 2024/2025 and it was like fairly recent at that time

Ok let me start by saying that I know that this is an nsfw work and I understand that it is mainly 50% nsfw and 50% story or even 60% nsfw and 40% story.

First of all let's start with the use of nsfw in relation to the story, I mainly watch this for the lore and I'm not kidding I literally said I will not goon to this and I will go over it more next.

PS: Dohyun's coach I will take at the end since she appears pretty late and it's a pretty short review

PS°2: Just stating now that for me the story would have been more impactful if Dohyun only had sexual activities with Hyuna (Remember first paragraph)

The manwha uses nsfw work really well with the story but I noticed that it tends to have a bit of a thirst trap reset every few major arcs, now for the examples: It is clear that Dohyun is made to date with Hyuna and i totally agree with it because all of the other sex scenes with other characters fall in the category of being one major hentai trope with Somin being the tomboy who wants to be treated like a plaything, Daon being the "cheating girlfriend" and the dominant-ish role (basically milf/housewife) and Yunji being the most behaved person in the spotlight but being totally lewd in private (recording her intercourse with Dohyun, having sex at school, wanting to be pregnant [with this part being more based on story but nonetheless is clearly a thirst trap]).

Ok now let's see why those use of sexual actions with the various characters sometimes ruins the plot: I know what I'm watching and I know that if there is a cast with 1 guy and multiple girls, that will be explored in the sexual direction, so this is the some sexual scenes that I don't think that make much sense with the story and why they just aren't probable to have happen:

All of Somin's scenes, she is one of the most "fuck for sake" of all the characters and I know why okay she is fucking hot and, specially in the first scenes with the tomboy short hair and that's why the sex scene that happens after Yunji disbands the club and Dohyun wants to know more about Yunji he goes to ask Somin, but Somin is agitated so they have sex and THEN she tells him what he wants to know because of COURSE that when you best friend says that you two were never friends the first thing that you do after that is going to fuck a dude because of course right?! (Remember the first paragraph of this post)

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The scene where Dohyun and Daon have sex in a motel or hotel after Dohyun discovers that he is being followed by two people, this one is also pretty obvious, buddy you just discovered that you were being followed by unknown people that could potentially harm you and maybe KILL you so why is the first thing that you is to drown in tities? (Not like it's not a good tactic to calm ones stress but still haha) (Remember the first paragraph)

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The sex scene with Yunji at school and part of the impregnation sex scene (I don't think that I need to get in detail with this one and no it's not because of the use of the impregnation kink)

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Now this one is literally one of the worst scenes story wise but one of the best in nsfw wise:

The threesome with Dohyun, Somin and Yunji at the hospital, FIRST OF ALL! MY BOY WAS RAN OVER BY A CARRRR AND IT WAS MAINLY YOUR FAULT AND THE FIRST THING THAT YOU THINK OF DOING IS GO TO TOWN ON HIM?! personally I would be offended and then just to make this even worse your LIFELONG AND BEST FRIEND WHO YOU STILL HAVEN'T REALLY MAKE UP THINGS WITH HER CAUGHT YOU TWO IN THE ACT AND THE FIRST THING THAT YOU DO IS INVITE HER TO JOIN?! And then they have "makeup" sex which is just a strange and borderline disgusting thing to do with your friend in a platonic way and then you just go on with your life's like nothing happened?! (Read first paragraph)

Ok now let's go over the ending of the manwha, it's pretty good but I think that Hyuna discovering that Dohyun had sex with everyone in the club (which he shouldn't have done in the first place, but since he did might as well tell her) and they going over what they did with Dohyun is OMG and the part where Yunji comes with the negative pregnancy test is Ahhhhh this in any way ruins the story but it's so wtf hahahaha like seriously is this that will make you finally acknowledge that you want to spend the rest of his life with him?

Ok, nos for the Coach this one is the most obvious she is a character the is there to cause the ending but she is also a woman so of course that Dohyun has to fuck her, like it's incredible if you skip the sex scene it will be like it never happened because they NEVER reference it after it was literally JUST a thirst trap

Ok done overhaul a pretty good story, the art is incredible and the sex scenes are stunning I missed that by the middle they started showing less and less time in the club room or playing and talking about gaming and going to tournaments, but it's okay it's not really something that is needed to be brought every single time because we know that it is happening as the story progresses and so on and so on.

As a final rating? Hmmm.......maybe an 8 overhaul? 7.5? Yeah something like that.

Thank you all it was really good to review It.

Oh I almost forgot I said that I would talk about the "no goon promise" I kept this promise throughout the whole manwha except for 2 scenes that are in my opinion the most hot: the sex scene with somin where she farms 7 or 9 waves without losing one minion and then they fuck and I think that it is the most long sex scene in the while manwha and the threesome one because bruh can you blame me.

That's it farewell.

Like one where the woman takes the lead and the woman is most of the time more experienced than the man.

But remember it's LIGHT femdom so no hard bdsm, humiliation, dick size difference, cuckolding, degrading, swearing, like nothing of the dominant "evil" type, either wholesome teasing type or mommy caring wholesome type oh and please nothing related or pedo.

And and I mean if it's not a bother for it to be like with girlfriend and boyfriend? Like true love?

What do I name when an experienced woman is having sex with an inexperienced man and the man is like losing control of themselves like almost reaching his limit every second and the woman is just like normal, like smirking and not really making a noise? Another strand of said kink is when the exact same thing but the woman is just not interested in having sex with him like just neutral about it like it's the most normal thing in the world

I'm just asking like when was the sudden "damn jelly bitches" like someone was just chilling at home and out of nowhere they just go "damn, that would be pretty sick" like when was the first appearance of a slime girl in that context?