Summary: Your package hasn’t come in weeks, so you finally cave and call the customer service line. Your assigned agent teases you, but they’re happy to help you take matters in your own hands to help make it come a little sooner.

Corrugated for Her Pleasure

1095 words, all sfx optional

Hello! I wrote a more comedic script for the first time, and I’m looking for feedback on overall flow, notes/disclaimers, and tagging.

Customer service agent helps your package come a little faster (~1000 words)

Summary: Your package hasn’t come in weeks, so you finally cave and call the customer service line. Your assigned agent teases you, but they’re happy to help you take matters in your own hands to help make it come a little sooner.

This script is a role-play where the speaker teases the listener as they are driving home, before arriving and having sex in person after the mic is shut off. It’s meant to be a teasing audio, and there are 0 orgasms for the speaker or listener.

A few questions:

• Do tags like [Phone Sex] and [JOE] belong on this script?
• Suggestions for the tags or summary to attract and not mislead listeners?
• How is the overall flow?
• Are there any parts that took you out of the story?
• Listener is not necessarily male, and their only physical descriptor is they have a penis. How can I make this clearer in tags/notes?

Thanks!

Hi everyone!

I had a lot of fun working on my first script here (~1800 words). Even though it’s late June, I’m new to the community and I've been really inspired by a lot of Doughvember pieces. I hope you enjoy!

-Anisia

Summary: You spent several days preparing special treat for girls’ night, but things didn’t go as planned tonight. You come home early, lava cakes in tow, and your boyfriend arrives soon after. After cuddling with you and your cat, calming you down, and hearing you out, he makes sure you know exactly how loved you are. In a hands-on (hands-free) kind of way..

Eat the lava cake like it’s your own damn pussy

All characters are 18+, minors do not interact.

I want you to hold me,
In your arms, as we fall asleep,
Your heart whispering sweet nothings
In my ear.
Your warmth washing over me
Like a wave simply rolling
onto the shore.

I want you to hold my breath for me
And return it when our lips touch.
Only to take it away from me again.
Can you keep it safe for me,
Until we meet again?

I want you to hold just my fingertips,
Feel the grooves in my fingers
Buzzing against your cock,
My fingers curling and swelling,
Playing you like an instrument
Tuned to your desire.

I want to hold your knuckles
In my hair.
As you push me further onto your cock.
I want to hold your breath
When I take you all the way
And leave you gasping for more.

I want to hold your hand
Inside me
Your thumb caressing my clit,
And the rest of your hand outstretched,
Reaching for my desire
Until it finally comes.

And when we’re done,
I want you to hold still
So I can cut all of this tension
With just my teeth.

Just tell me where.

Summary: Your girlfriend loves showing you her progress every week after her weekly pole dancing class. She loves hearing what you feel too.

Cuddling with your pole dancer girlfriend after her class

This is my suggestive love letter to pole dancing. Excited to have put out this first script and I hope you enjoy!

-Anisia